求翻譯啊，這怎么翻譯啊？

I will put something that Iwant to give you at the guard of your department.You can take it when you come back from Burma.

I'll leave the things that I'm giving you with the security guard at your apartment. You can pick them up on your return from Burma.
這個說法最簡潔。
地道英語。

I'll put the I will give you things in your apartment security guard there, when you come back from Burma, you can get it.

i will leave the things you want at the guard room of your apartment, when you back from Burma,you can take it.

樓上有些語法不通。

我會把我要給你的東西放在你公寓的門衛(wèi)那里，等你從緬甸回來的時候，你可以去拿它。

I'll leave the things I want to give you with the security guard in your apartment, so you can retrieve them when you return from Burma.

地道的翻譯，希望對你有幫助。