翻譯成英語：隨著這痛徹心扉的吶喊，深藏在她心里的家園意識蘇醒了。

Along with this painful penetrating call of heart, deep regained consciousness in her homeland consciousness.

需要我修改。。？

當是拋磚引玉了。

after bursting out the desperate cry, her home consciousness deep inside her heart was regained.

倒過來也行，看你強調(diào)啥。

The home consciousness hidden deep in her heart suddenly burst into lives along with the heart piercing shout.

with the painful whoop, the home consciousness which is buried in her heart revived.

The hoarse shouts which gush from her soul has wakened her home consciousness from deep sleep.

The hoarse shouts has revived her home consciousness which was hidden in her innermost heart.

痛徹心扉形容叫喊的聲嘶力竭，可理解為發(fā)自靈魂的，painful cry表示痛苦的喊叫，兩者明顯有區(qū)別，你是要選擇哪一種？后半句當然也可以使用比喻手法，把意識從沉睡中喚醒

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后者翻譯的比較普通